They found some wood and rock to use for their plan. “ We made it” said Phillip. “we should test this if it is good, ” said Josh. “yea” said Phillip. they water their plan if it will tumble down to ground. “yes it worked” said the boys. At night time Phillip had a sore tummy then he got furry and had pointy ears. He wolfed so loudly “wooooooooolf” Josh herd it and look at the side to see if Phillip was there, but he wasn’t. Josh went outside to see if he was there to. he was scared because he lost his friend then he saw a shadow “is that you!” said Josh in a scared voice. he went over to see if that was him.“aaaaaaaaah”he said. The wolf got up on him he was running as fast as he can Josh was dodging the trees and the wolf was breathen he found himself back home then the wolf came and turn back to Phillip they were that they were back home.
I am a Year 8 learner in Room 3 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mrs Tele'a.
Wednesday, 4 September 2019
Write like Paul Jennings
They found some wood and rock to use for their plan. “ We made it” said Phillip. “we should test this if it is good, ” said Josh. “yea” said Phillip. they water their plan if it will tumble down to ground. “yes it worked” said the boys. At night time Phillip had a sore tummy then he got furry and had pointy ears. He wolfed so loudly “wooooooooolf” Josh herd it and look at the side to see if Phillip was there, but he wasn’t. Josh went outside to see if he was there to. he was scared because he lost his friend then he saw a shadow “is that you!” said Josh in a scared voice. he went over to see if that was him.“aaaaaaaaah”he said. The wolf got up on him he was running as fast as he can Josh was dodging the trees and the wolf was breathen he found himself back home then the wolf came and turn back to Phillip they were that they were back home.
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