I am a Year 8 learner in Room 3 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mrs Tele'a.
Friday, 20 March 2020
THE young detective
The Young Detective
It had been three days since it had gone missing. One minute he had held it in his hand, the next it had vanished. How could it just have disappeared? It had been right in front of his eyes!
He had been warned about what would happen if he lost it. His mission had been to guard the key with his life, ever since they visited him last
summer.
Adam had always had a detective’s instinct. They had told him as much. He had been chosen because he had certain skills, and he would need them more than ever now.
Only one clue had seemingly been left, which was sat on the living room table.
Holding the magnifying glass up to his eye, Adam began to investigate
the entire house then saw something interesting in the living room; he picked it up and acted like nothing happened. He went to his room and close the door, but he knew that it was a pen he press on it and then it turn into a sword, it was very heavy for him he heard his mom coming he went to go hide the sword, the mum asked him “are you all right” he said year i just donk my head on the door” after telling his mum a lie he went back investigating the house. He saw a secret doorway in the house, he opened it and went inside the secret doorway, he brought a flashlight with him so he know where to go, while he was walking he saw a skeleton holding some looking old map, he took it of the skeleton and looked at it while he was walking, on the map it will lead him to x with a picture of a treasure. He was very happy to find the treasure.
But on the map it had a heap of traps. He was not scared of anything because he is a detective; he uses his sword to keep him safe and uses his magnifying glass so he knows where to go. he is ready to beat up the traps after that he made it to the treasure, then became rich. He was amazed, so he went to go and tell his family at the end.
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